These are some of my poems in progress. These poems are not finished. I've never finished a poem. I keep moving the words around.
Sunday, March 26, 2006
Dishes in the Cupboard
I wipe the dish gently, place it carefully in the cupboard, on the top shelf, in the back, where it won’t be seen, and won’t be used.
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I like it. If you had finished it, I would give it ten out of ten. But since you say it is "unfinished", I give it a nine. That should leave it room to grow.
This poetry blog includes drafts of poems and drafts of song lyrics that I share with my songwriting partner. I continue to experiment. All comments are welcome.
3 comments:
I like it. If you had finished it, I would give it ten out of ten. But since you say it is "unfinished", I give it a nine. That should leave it room to grow.
you should finish it
true,you should finish it.
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